cool intro
I like the intro to the song and basically the whole concept of it. Though i do have a couple suggestions i would like to make. First of all you need to make certain parts of the song more dinamic meaning... i heard the intro and after that nothing really jumped out at me it was just like a flat piece of paper. Throw in some extra stuff in the middle or something. overall i did like it though.
P.S.
yes it does need masterd and yes the Quote unquote "guitar solo" make me want to tear my guts out lol. you should really work on a real solo lol.
anyways gj